FIRST PART OF SCRIPT \(O.O)/

This is the first part of the script I created. The -- lines mean the actions. When it says (thoughts) that speaks for itself. Tell me the changes you want me to make:

Mom: Yuuko!!! You’re gonna be late!!!

Yuuko: Coming mom!

-Yuuko is wearing her uniform with glasses: nerdy girl with brown hair and really big brown eyes-

Mom: I can’t believe you are going to [insert school name]!!! It’s supposed to be a very hard school to get in to let alone transfer!

Dad: I know that you just decided to focus on your school work and not be part of that gang anymore so remember your goal, okay?

Yuuko: Of course, father!

Dad: Oh and Yuuko? –Yuuko turns around- Have fun.

Yuuko: -smiles softly- yeah…

-When Yuuko walks out of the door she looks up at the sky and puts on a determined smile-

Yuuko: Alright! Let’s have a successful year!!!-as she says this has the “fist”-

-Yuuko starts walking and as she gets closer to the school she notices that all the girls are pretty and the boys are super handsome. She freezes and then stress lines appear on her as well as the sweat-drop. She runs really fast and she encounters a boy with black hair and golden-brown eyes that looks like he just rolled out of bed. He eyes her with disinterest. Yuuko stops and her eyes her messed up hair. She sees him and grabs his shirt-

Yuuko: Where’s the bathroom?

Boy: It’s down the hall and on your left. Are you…(was going to say “…the new transfer student?)

-Before he could finish his question, Yuuko runs off-

Yuuko: (thoughts) He looks familiar somehow…

-Boy looks at her strangely and walks off into classroom-

Teacher: You’re not the transfer student, [insert boy’s name]. Where is she?

Boy: I believe she went to the bathroom.

Yuuko: (in the bathroom, thoughts) Oh my gosh that was embarrassing! I can’t believe all the pretty girls and cute boys! I expected them to be all nerds since it was such a prestigious school academically. Well, that’s the least of my problems. What am I gonna do with this hair?! Luckily I brought some make-up just in case but I never expected I would need make-up!

-applies lip stick, takes off her glasses, and puts her hair in a low ponytail on the side. She untucks her shirt and looks at her reflection in the mirror-

Yuuko: It’ll have to do for today. Tomorrow… -sweat-drop- MY PARENTS ARE GONNA KILL ME IF THEY SEE ME LIKE THIS!!! (thoughts) I’ll just bring my make-up and do it at school. That’ll work.